Post by Smarky Smark on Oct 10, 2009 20:58:42 GMT
Match- Ryan Hughes and Chris Pederoso vs Stone Orchard (My last EVPW match before the screwjob EDIT: THIS WAS THE SCREWJOB)
Date- 26 September 09
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As “New Day” by Adelita’s Way dies down, the fans are torn. Half want to cheer Pederoso as a Spanish hero, yet other want to step in to the ring and happily kick his ass, hence the boos. One thing is for certain though- they all want to know who the partner is. Who would want to partner with the “Master of the Lacerator” against a team like Stone Orchard? Who is mad enough to step in to the ring with the United Glory Tag Champions? The crowd is kept in suspense, as Pederoso starts stretching; keeping a cocky grin on his face, possibly because of the identity of his partner.
"Well, who is it? We all want to know here.”
"Then again, who would want to partner with this guy? What has he done? Nothing for no-one.”
"Everyone can have an opinion Sangy; yours may be wrong, but you can have an opinion.”
"DON’T EVER CALL ME THAT! JESUS!"
The titantron flickers, and a silhouette of a human body comes in to view on a blue background. A rift from an electric guitar begins to play and repeat, with each repeat causing the lights to flash on momentarily. As the rest of the song kicks in, the pyros go off at the top of the ramp way. As “Morning Glory” by Oasis begins, the lights suddenly flash on, causing the excited fans to scream and shout in anticipation.
“WHAT THE HELL!”
Ryan Hughes comes out, with the coveted TV Title around his waist; shattering some of the illusions of the SNK fans over his identity. The Chief Batmanite enters the fray to a rapturous reception from the fans as the titantron shows Ryan using his trademark Strikeout finisher on several opponents from other federations and recent footage of Ryan performing the Mancunian Mash Up, Spiker, Batman Lock and other big moves on opponents from past federations. Ryan is wearing a shirt that bears the symbol “24/7” that is covered by a circle with a line through it. Following him is his manager, Smarky Smark, who is carrying Ryan’s trademark “modified” baseball bat, wary not to move his hand in to the barbed wire.
All your dreams are made
When you're chained to your mirror with your razor blade
Today's the day that all the world will see
Another sunny afternoon
Walking to the sound of your favorite tune
Tomorrow never knows what it doesn't know too soon
"Introducing the partner, being accompanied to the ring by “The Shaman of Sci-Fi” Smarky Smark, from Manchester, England, standing at 6'5 and weighing in at 251lbs, he is the EVPW Television Champion.... Ryan Hughes!"
"Well that explains the lack of Mr. Valencia then! Who needs him when you have Smarky Smark?! And Ryan has been on quite the unbeaten streak on WNG lately, surely Stone Orchard can’t prepare for that?”
"Remember though, look at the people Matt and MD have beaten. The Family, All That Counts, Sex and Violence, Ryan and Pederoso could very well be next on a long list. In terms of the mystery partner though, I had other ideas…"
“Why, what were you thinking?”
“Metal Dragon heel turn. Smell the ratings in that one Trix.”
Need a little time to wake up
Need a little time to wake up wake up
Need a little time to wake up
Need a little time to rest your mind
You know you should so I guess you might as well
What's the story morning glory
Well you need a little time to wake up wake up
Well what's the story morning glory
Well need a little time to wake up wake up
Ryan walks slowly down one side of the ramp way hi-5ing the fans then goes back to hi-5 the other side, all the while with Smarky Smark behind him, geeing the fans up, by giving the traditional Vulcan salute. Ryan notices a kid who has a bat on the front row; he gets it from him, and raises the bat in to the air with authority, then gives it back to the smiling child. Ryan enters the ring and he heads to the turnbuckle. When on the second rope, he raises his title with one hand, while giving a Vulcan sign in the other. The music dies down but you can still hear the fans shouting “BATMAN BATMAN” He takes off his top, before throwing it to the fans, and heading over to Chris Pederoso in order to talk tactics with him and Smarky.
TBC Stone Orchard
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-Firstly, note the array of colour. This is integral to let the reader see what is going on easily. It is used to seperate dialogue from action, and lyrics from both. In this, I didn't note the commentators names because I was a veteran, and everyone knew the commentators. I would advise you to label the text with the name of the speaker, for example:
- Secondly, I hoped you noticed the content inside it. This helps to set the scene. Although it isn't necessarily involved in the judging process, it lets the judge get more in to the flow of the match, and possibly swing their vote in your favour. Trust me, Im the judge
- Thirdly, the lyrics. These arent really needed, but yeah. I use them because my entrace songs are usually obscure, and it is a lot better than using a YouTube video. (Once again, trust me on this as I'm judging your matches.) This is optional, as is everything involved in an entrance.
- The only things that are needed in your Entrance RP are action (In order to show your superstar heading to the ring) and an intro from the ring announcer (so we know who your superstar is). Everything else just makes your RP look better.
Be on the lookout for further tutorials in the run up to the opening Saturday Night X-Treme, and feel free to ask questions about this entrance on anything you dont understand.
Date- 26 September 09
-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-
As “New Day” by Adelita’s Way dies down, the fans are torn. Half want to cheer Pederoso as a Spanish hero, yet other want to step in to the ring and happily kick his ass, hence the boos. One thing is for certain though- they all want to know who the partner is. Who would want to partner with the “Master of the Lacerator” against a team like Stone Orchard? Who is mad enough to step in to the ring with the United Glory Tag Champions? The crowd is kept in suspense, as Pederoso starts stretching; keeping a cocky grin on his face, possibly because of the identity of his partner.
"Well, who is it? We all want to know here.”
"Then again, who would want to partner with this guy? What has he done? Nothing for no-one.”
"Everyone can have an opinion Sangy; yours may be wrong, but you can have an opinion.”
"DON’T EVER CALL ME THAT! JESUS!"
The titantron flickers, and a silhouette of a human body comes in to view on a blue background. A rift from an electric guitar begins to play and repeat, with each repeat causing the lights to flash on momentarily. As the rest of the song kicks in, the pyros go off at the top of the ramp way. As “Morning Glory” by Oasis begins, the lights suddenly flash on, causing the excited fans to scream and shout in anticipation.
“WHAT THE HELL!”
Ryan Hughes comes out, with the coveted TV Title around his waist; shattering some of the illusions of the SNK fans over his identity. The Chief Batmanite enters the fray to a rapturous reception from the fans as the titantron shows Ryan using his trademark Strikeout finisher on several opponents from other federations and recent footage of Ryan performing the Mancunian Mash Up, Spiker, Batman Lock and other big moves on opponents from past federations. Ryan is wearing a shirt that bears the symbol “24/7” that is covered by a circle with a line through it. Following him is his manager, Smarky Smark, who is carrying Ryan’s trademark “modified” baseball bat, wary not to move his hand in to the barbed wire.
All your dreams are made
When you're chained to your mirror with your razor blade
Today's the day that all the world will see
Another sunny afternoon
Walking to the sound of your favorite tune
Tomorrow never knows what it doesn't know too soon
"Introducing the partner, being accompanied to the ring by “The Shaman of Sci-Fi” Smarky Smark, from Manchester, England, standing at 6'5 and weighing in at 251lbs, he is the EVPW Television Champion.... Ryan Hughes!"
"Well that explains the lack of Mr. Valencia then! Who needs him when you have Smarky Smark?! And Ryan has been on quite the unbeaten streak on WNG lately, surely Stone Orchard can’t prepare for that?”
"Remember though, look at the people Matt and MD have beaten. The Family, All That Counts, Sex and Violence, Ryan and Pederoso could very well be next on a long list. In terms of the mystery partner though, I had other ideas…"
“Why, what were you thinking?”
“Metal Dragon heel turn. Smell the ratings in that one Trix.”
Need a little time to wake up
Need a little time to wake up wake up
Need a little time to wake up
Need a little time to rest your mind
You know you should so I guess you might as well
What's the story morning glory
Well you need a little time to wake up wake up
Well what's the story morning glory
Well need a little time to wake up wake up
Ryan walks slowly down one side of the ramp way hi-5ing the fans then goes back to hi-5 the other side, all the while with Smarky Smark behind him, geeing the fans up, by giving the traditional Vulcan salute. Ryan notices a kid who has a bat on the front row; he gets it from him, and raises the bat in to the air with authority, then gives it back to the smiling child. Ryan enters the ring and he heads to the turnbuckle. When on the second rope, he raises his title with one hand, while giving a Vulcan sign in the other. The music dies down but you can still hear the fans shouting “BATMAN BATMAN” He takes off his top, before throwing it to the fans, and heading over to Chris Pederoso in order to talk tactics with him and Smarky.
TBC Stone Orchard
-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-
-Firstly, note the array of colour. This is integral to let the reader see what is going on easily. It is used to seperate dialogue from action, and lyrics from both. In this, I didn't note the commentators names because I was a veteran, and everyone knew the commentators. I would advise you to label the text with the name of the speaker, for example:
Trix- "Well that explains the lack of Mr. Valencia then! Who needs him when you have Smarky Smark?! And Ryan has been on quite the unbeaten streak on WNG lately, surely Stone Orchard can’t prepare for that?”
Sang- "Remember though, look at the people Matt and MD have beaten. The Family, All That Counts, Sex and Violence, Ryan and Pederoso could very well be next on a long list. In terms of the mystery partner though, I had other ideas…"
Trix- “Why, what were you thinking?”
Sang- “Metal Dragon heel turn. Smell the ratings in that one Trix.”
Sang- "Remember though, look at the people Matt and MD have beaten. The Family, All That Counts, Sex and Violence, Ryan and Pederoso could very well be next on a long list. In terms of the mystery partner though, I had other ideas…"
Trix- “Why, what were you thinking?”
Sang- “Metal Dragon heel turn. Smell the ratings in that one Trix.”
- Secondly, I hoped you noticed the content inside it. This helps to set the scene. Although it isn't necessarily involved in the judging process, it lets the judge get more in to the flow of the match, and possibly swing their vote in your favour. Trust me, Im the judge
- Thirdly, the lyrics. These arent really needed, but yeah. I use them because my entrace songs are usually obscure, and it is a lot better than using a YouTube video. (Once again, trust me on this as I'm judging your matches.) This is optional, as is everything involved in an entrance.
- The only things that are needed in your Entrance RP are action (In order to show your superstar heading to the ring) and an intro from the ring announcer (so we know who your superstar is). Everything else just makes your RP look better.
Be on the lookout for further tutorials in the run up to the opening Saturday Night X-Treme, and feel free to ask questions about this entrance on anything you dont understand.